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The angel of love is burned at the stake
A price to pay her mistake
As the fire burns her silken skin
Her heart blackens from the anger within
As her anger grows the world slowly dies
Light turns to dark and hides the skies
Where love lived, replaced by hate
Damning our world to this darkened fate
this poem is sooo old, i barely remeber writing it, byt my sis :iconvalamon: found

:heart: luvs u oonii
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Valamon Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2009
me loves u too sis :D
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Tinuramon Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
yay,feel the love
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Valamon Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009
wew
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Tinuramon Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
la di da di doo
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Valamon Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009
lulz
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wingless-and-rising Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2008
The emotion is conveyed very well. It paints a picture. Good poem^^
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Tinuramon Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
awww thank you, i appreciate your critism
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wingless-and-rising Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2008
Of course, I appreciate you giving me something to read ^^. as a writer my self I enjoy nothing more than to read the works of my peers.
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Tinuramon Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
im glad to be one of your peers
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